Staring in the eyes of darkness

Staring in the eyes of darkness

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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In the eyes,
That stare, from behind the cries,
They stare back at me,
A never ending circle,
Why did the sky turn purple?
Or is it just a dream?
Maybe a nightmare?

In the black night, sparkling flares,
Seems like someone still dares,
To hope they get saved,
But will anyone care?
Hopes die, with the sparks they fly,
And turn into smoke,
That was all for hope.

The epidem alarm is screaming...
The noise stretched out long,
Climbing up,
And slowly going down.

The infection now spread,
The world dead,
Hey kid, where's your dad?
It feels like dread.
Or am I just dead?
Its fight for ourselves,
Free for all, stand up and fall.

A moment wasted,
Someone's scull busted,
Jesus!
God!
Allah!
They scream,
Before they explode into cream.
Welcome to a never ending dream,
Or is it just a nightmare?
Another, from the many,
That we all call reality.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
So you read it all the way. Thanks. What do ya think, about the meaning?

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The poem create many meaning and thoughts.
"The infection now spread,
The world dead,
Hey kid, where's your dad?
It feels like dread.
Or am I just dead?
Its fight for ourselves,
Free for all, stand up and fall. "
Had the feel of war and struggle. I did like the honest tone leading to the true ending. No-one will win with violence and war as the world lead. Powerful thoughts left the reader with many things to think about. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I have been telling people. If we don't change. It will be a "Mad Max" world. Old movie could be ne.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

The saddest thing about that, is that it is true! sometimes i wonder, how long is humanity going to .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are right. I have been saying for many years. Will take a great city to die for us to learn. All.. read more



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Wow... Danny, this is not just dark and gloomy but deeply woven array of thoughts. A beautiful personification of sadness and emptiness...
There are many lines that jump off the screen and touches the readers..
I loved the plot and flow but I especially liked the end. Violence can never result in peace.
Amazing work dear!
Going to my favourites' list!
Kudos!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

wow. :-) thanks :D
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
The poem create many meaning and thoughts.
"The infection now spread,
The world dead,
Hey kid, where's your dad?
It feels like dread.
Or am I just dead?
Its fight for ourselves,
Free for all, stand up and fall. "
Had the feel of war and struggle. I did like the honest tone leading to the true ending. No-one will win with violence and war as the world lead. Powerful thoughts left the reader with many things to think about. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I have been telling people. If we don't change. It will be a "Mad Max" world. Old movie could be ne.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

The saddest thing about that, is that it is true! sometimes i wonder, how long is humanity going to .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are right. I have been saying for many years. Will take a great city to die for us to learn. All.. read more
Oh my God! From where do you take such power? I love this poem, adding it to my favorites.

The description of all cruelties that come with war, are described perfectly. In this piece, I see a lot of stuff that would come with modern warfare. Also, I see the number one weapon of terrorists... Suicide bombers. They been killing people, and spreading terror all over the world. This piece is so well written, that you could say that you actually lived all of that, and came here to tell the story. Awesome, powerful write as always my friend. Onehundred points.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Creator

8 Years Ago

You are always welcome :)
The world is in anarchy and humans are at war with nature too. A nice writeIM

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) sorry i'm so late with this...i somehow forgot to comment...?
Pretty cool
it kinda reminds me of a world war one and world war two tribute. kinda like a solders view of life. you can see the difference in reality views. its kinda like seeing the world for the first time and they hate it. its cool and entrenching. really well written. ^-^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) i was tryin to show how ugly wars really are. Anyways, thanks for the input. i'm always.. read more
~S.S.A.F.

8 Years Ago

anytime its entertaining to read
pretty surreal

very atmospheric with this one IM


-Dream

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

It kinda is... Thanks for readin :)
closed

8 Years Ago

no problem
Awesome piece! I assume with the "In the black night, sparkling flares" we are talking about war? It's a deep write my friend... good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Yep. Thanks for readin :)
war, the purple skies , the screams, the lives lost ...suicide bomb... so sad that this is a reality! Brilliant write Ethan!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Exactly. thanks for reading :)
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The meaning? It can mean so many things, but by knowing of the way you write I would say it is about endless war and its consequences. I'm sure you know enough about history to know that wars have gone on since groups of cavemen threw rocks at each other...for what? Wars based on religious beliefs, over land parcels...over hatred? Why do we do it? If you can ever find out the answer to that please let me know. Great piece of writing. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Why? simple. Humanity is the ugliest beast out there. Thanks for reading :)
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The moment you realize that the people who are meant to support
and give you hope are just cowardly running in the shadow

It is scary
but a life changing second
you understand and fully feel the presence of god

Telling you hey
I got this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thanks for readin. :)
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

As for god...nope... God is nowhere around my life. Anyways, i wrote this about war.

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