Sister mine

This one goes for Tess, and Aless.

You know, the shining stars,
Just some sparks,
Not enough, to say,
No, there is no way,
To tell you,
How much I love you.
I treasure the time,
Every second,
You are first, not second.
We were down,
If it wasn't for you, I'd drown.
When there is no hope,
My wrists bleed,
You're the last light,
Lets go, one more fight.
I love you, much more.
This time, no one wins,
I know you get it, we're like twins
I love you sister mine.
The past wont come back,
Childhood days gone by,
The last of them,
They're special, thanks to you.
When you feel there's no hope,
All around abusive hate,
I'll be there, for you.
Come to my arms,
I've got love and care.
You deserve that,
Have no doubts,
You're amazing.
This time, here and now,
Don't ask when or how,
I'll be there for you,
Whenever you need it.
Sometimes, they all forget,
And they wont regret,
Pushing you away,
But they should take your hand.
Spare their words for then,
When they see who you really are.
There are no words,
To say, how much I love you,
Dear sister of mine.
Keep your chin high,
Don't look back,
It's time to fly,
Let the worries die.
This is your time,
It is our time.
Let your heart shine,
When the darkness makes everyone blind.
You're beautiful,
Inside and out.
Love you sister mine.

Reviews

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

I was very blown away from this poem. you did an amazing job on writing this. it really made me cry. Thank you so much my dearest and sweetest baby brother ever. I love you forever and nothing is going to change that. I will NOT ask god for any other baby brother. I love you and thank you again!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

No thank you.. I adore this poem. I am going to print it out and put it on my wall!! cuz I love you!! thank you again sweetie. I love you with all my heart and my soul! you are the best baby bro EVAH!!!!! I LOVE YOU DANNY TAYLOR!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wow ... lol. love you way more :D ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

nuh uh. I will kill you.. heheh.. ok well I wont do that. but I do love you so much!!! thank you again. and I love you way more cuz I am older.. so there :P

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hahaha you wish! lol love you more!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

yea.. ok. I love you more and you know it. so there :P

[Tomoe Tellez]

Aww! This so warm and sweet I could literally see pink and red hearts in this poem's words. Your poems are always special and beautiful.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[Not here]

great job on this. i know i haven't read your stuff as much lately, but i'm onna try to read it more so. this was one of my favorites that you've wrote (written? idk). keep it up :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[A writer]

Well, gorgeous, your poetry is getting better, and better. She's blown away. :) I can't wait to see the others reaction, when they read the ones you wrote for them. :)
On my way to yours. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Na, hát már elfelejtetted, hogy magyarul írkálunk egymásnak? hahaha. no de azér köszönöm! :D

[A writer]

Ne köszönd meg. Imádlak :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

jó van..de új szöveg nincs? hehe. csak vicceltem. :D

[A writer]

De van... Csak nem magyarul... De azért én még imádlak.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

hehe...kicsit nyálas let a szöveged...hahaha. :D

[A writer]

Az lehet... Talán a tegnapi nyelves miatt? Hahaha. :-)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hehehe. lehet... :)

[Shah Sabia]

Elegant, as always. And I'm glad you're back. Welcome back, Danny! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wow... im welcomed now...lol.
Thanks :) very much :)