For my best friends

For my best friends

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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just some lame poem, intended as a thanks to all my friends on here.

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I'm living under a cloud,
My voice silent, not loud,
But heard it will be, no doubt.

I love you all,
With you, one can stand tall.
Poets and writers you are,
No worlds are too far,
From your words,
Life works,
For a better future.

You helped this pile of darkness,
Flooded me with your kindness,
Put life, into the hopelessness,
Light into darkness,
Though you never met me in life.
Just through words,
In digital worlds.

I wonder, if you even know,
How much you mean to me,
I wonder if you know...


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
Hope it wasn't too bad.

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No akkor basznám meg a szájukat, keresztbe-hosszába, ha valamit szólnának ellene. Tudod, hogy neked, érted él minden vers, amit neked adtam. Ha senki másra nem, de rám mindig számíthatsz. Édesem, te vagy a fiúm, én meg a tiéd. Ebben soha ne kételkedj. Én szeretlek, úgy ahogy vagy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

aha...már értem... na jól van kolega, majd írj üzenetet.
A writer

8 Years Ago

Jól van, maj írok. :-)
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Ha, yes. He lived just outside of Bucharest, indeed part of historical Transylvania.



Reviews

More than anything I would love to know how much my words mean to you, that is a writers dream. I do hope I don't offend you by considering myself your friend! But I do haha, even though we haven't even know each other a whole day and have never met! I love this poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

No offence taken... xD you are my friend, and so this poem goes for you too :-) since how long we me.. read more
Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Fantastic :D
I class myself as your friend Danny. This is a supreme testament to how friendship can traverse all border even the electronic. Top write !!

Posted 8 Years Ago


ANTO

8 Years Ago

yeah but he just logged off - probably logged onto his pants lmao ... xD
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha xD lol he better or I'll keep making him cry lol.
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

I think he had more than enough. Lol. hahaha :D I'm going to open a "Chase trolls away" company. xD
We are all just living life the best we can... encouraging others who share the same passion. I see that passion in you and I see an awesome person :) Love the write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

thank you my friend :D
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
B
Ofcourse everyone does
what better way to connect with others but through a simple truthful world
And what lucky are the few
Who speak the same language

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I loved it bro c: Good work and thanks for all the help you have provided me with my writing!! I tried to give 1000000/100 but it wouldn't work :p

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

lol i know. thanks
thanks a lot danny ... you helped me a lot .. i am grateful to you ... and this poem is really great 100% rating ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

thanks for the read and the comment.
zunie frost

8 Years Ago

Welcome !!!!
These few lines did a prodigious work. Much kudos to you :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

thanks for the read and the comment.
well I really loved that quick wrote up. Can I tell you something, I have been working on writing you a poem. it is almost done. I love you bro! I loved tha poem and keep up the hard work my dear!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

xD xD maybe Andy would like a try.... xD xD lmfao. :DDDD
A writer

8 Years Ago

o_O Danny boy, you're going to regret this... Lol. No more romantic nights for you Mister! Hahaha :-.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Right.........
.XD xD xD ♥
Thank you Danny! This makes me feel more worthy as a meager poet on this huge place.
And I don't regret reading it!
Thank you for writing this! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

I use to come at WC even then jus not quite as often as I would like.
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

okay. well did you write anything new lately?
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Yes a few. I will RR again! :)

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