Consciousness

Consciousness

A Poem by DansStories
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Is it worth it to look to the stars?

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To what length can willpower take me to?
I reach for the stars knowing I can only pretend.
Dreams blind me from the confinement of reality.
Still, I close my eyes and leave it to fate to be my friend.


Although my outcome is quite clear, I hope for the best
Fluttering around me the is truth closing in
I cover my eyes but I can see through the cracks of my fingers
Even if the scoreboard says that I'm losing, I believe that I can win






Gazing into a cloudy, star-filled night, I lean forward crossing my arms;
Doubtful of the worth of the stars.



© 2010 DansStories


Author's Note

DansStories
I tried to jam all my thoughts into this. I tried to make it longer...I really did but I could not find anything else to put down.

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A very beautifully written poem. Lovely, optimistic and full of light and hope. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This seems like a familiar thought process, although I admit that my own is less optimistic. I admire this as I admire much of our work. It seems so light, but with a message to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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DansStories
DansStories

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A Poem by DansStories