Ode to fantasy

Whilst dreams inspire hope.... gazing grasps no falsity
To gaze is to see... to interpret.... to view and to fathom
There is no masquerade here
no hidden meaning
This is, what it is..
an ode to fantasy
a ballad to reverie
were words fail to emote
were temperament is awestruck
were mediocrity ends
away from flesh
away from ourselves
longing for....
genuine excitement
that occasional surge of adrenaline
to frame... a portrait of beatitude
that's conceived no more.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You bring to life that sense of excitement that resonates at times in our hearts... there on the edge of existence. Powerfully done.

[Poeticpiers]

enjoyable read expressed in free form An ode it is not

[darem aq.]

greeting all,
thanks for the feedback !! :D

peace i shall find...

[Ahmad Alhour]

Very astonishing entrance to the community of writers!
As I have said before, you never seize to amaze me with your unique style.

Welcome to our community, may you find peace and joy here :)

[Bette]

you did great on this!

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. Great word choice and rhythm. Great job! keep it up!