Under the same sky

Under the same sky

A Book by Aldora Sparrow
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This is the story of Ryoto and how he comes to accept that not all women are deceiving, "giggling and flirting" burdens.

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© 2008 Aldora Sparrow


Author's Note

Aldora Sparrow
I am going to write the first four major chapters then will add small chapters in between. The major four are Nijiame, Yuki, Kaze, and Hoshi. All of the small chapters will be added to the main chapter. Thank you!

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it kept me reading from beginning to end. there is just something with how you wrote it...something that makes me marvel at hikari and adore kazuki the way ryoto does in his perspective. it's descriptive, and the scenery you have painted is just so serene and easy to love. i'd really really like to bring clara in the picture on the upcoming chapters (i hope there are) not only as a memory or as a thought. maybe she'd come back or something? and you could also perhaps expand on alex, he was the main character's best friend after all. and basing on the previous events mentioned, he and alex had a lot going on before.

GREAT BOOK. Send me a read request when the next chapter's up. Looking forward to finishing it.

(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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it kept me reading from beginning to end. there is just something with how you wrote it...something that makes me marvel at hikari and adore kazuki the way ryoto does in his perspective. it's descriptive, and the scenery you have painted is just so serene and easy to love. i'd really really like to bring clara in the picture on the upcoming chapters (i hope there are) not only as a memory or as a thought. maybe she'd come back or something? and you could also perhaps expand on alex, he was the main character's best friend after all. and basing on the previous events mentioned, he and alex had a lot going on before.

GREAT BOOK. Send me a read request when the next chapter's up. Looking forward to finishing it.

(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..

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