A Human Mind

A Human Mind

A Poem by Iretex2012

Figuring out your mind

Is like trying to get through a maze

Without a map in hand

By the time I have you figured out

The seasons have already change

Your on to something else

Wondering why is your mind so complex?

Wanting to understand you and the way you are

This is why I stay around

To try to figure you out

 

 

© 2008 Iretex2012


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thats good

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! This is a clever write. 'tis true that it's hard to figure out someone else's mind and when you get the chance to understand it, it suddenly changes. And then you need to figure it out yet again. It's like a quicksand. It draws you in deeper until you get lost. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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A great piece! Understanding someone can take such a long time! Sometime's I wish they sold patience at the local mini-marts! I can totally relate to this...I know I have waited to figure out people before..some...i'm still working on and that's years after i met them!

Very nice!

Line 5 "Change?" Should be "Changed" :)

Tara M Stone

Posted 15 Years Ago


lol. This is a classic piece. Do you realize how many women, who are natural nurtures, feel compelled to understand. The same can apply to the male who is baffled by a woman's mystique. Great write. Rain..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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