Confessions of a Vampire version 3

Confessions of a Vampire 
 
I want to bite your neck, 
I’m tempted to come in close; 
Like Odysseus wanting to approach the Sirens. 
 

I hear you. 
The sound of your blood 
Pulsing fast through your veins. 
Oh! 
The sounds are so sweet! 
Just like the songs of the Sirens. 

I want to feast with you 
on a moon-less night. 
The thought of together 
makes me forever lust. 

I am full of blood-lust 
Hunting for the sound of your blood in the dark.

I wait for you to come out.

Then I jump and take you down.

Just like a spider and her pray.

Forever we are in two beats.

Reviews

[Andrew - Moon Fixer]

It's nice. But for some reason i get the regular Stereo type vampire. It's okay but I wanted more. Try this. He sits on his chair brooding, looking at darken walls. He holds a red rose in his hands... Now go from there. I am no expert on vampires. But i've been told that I do resemble them. Also try this... Put yourself in the vampires place what do you see. and don't see the regular things. Look darker. I hope this will help.
Thank you
Andrew