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What now no longer is

What now no longer is

A Poem by May

Sweet melody,
That you carried with you.
Sweet sour love,
That you shared with me.
Sweet scent,
That I will never forget.

Sweet is the sun,
That shines upon your skin.
Sweet is the moon,
That takes me away to sleep.

Sweet was our love,
Sweet it could have always been.
Sweet was all,
That now no longer is. 

© 2018 May


Author's Note

May
please ignore any grammar problems. hope you like it.

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Very nice read. I always look for the heart and I felt it here. Nice job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


May

5 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing
sweet writing style you have
I enjoyed each and every line. honestly amazing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing and reading my piece 🖤
A.Tarek

5 Years Ago

Its my pleasure.. though, I'm not so into poetry but I still enjoy your poems.
Keep sending m.. read more
May

5 Years Ago

Thanks, I know you prefer story’s but i really appreciate that you took your time to read this pie.. read more
"Sweet was all that now no longer is."

This is pretty profound honestly. It doesn't even matter if we truly figured it sweet in the moment because the past is always romantic to us. It's a good thing to keep in mind.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for a amazing review
so painful but the poem is full of metaphors that carry out a sweet message but the last line is the ironic twist to the poem it speaks of pain.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

5 Years Ago

I love how you interpreted my piece, your right its a poem filled with pain, which is why is a bitte.. read more
sette

5 Years Ago

you are welcome
memories of a lost love is always bitter sweet,enjoyed the write

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

5 Years Ago

Thank you for taking your time to review
 wordman

5 Years Ago

my pleasure

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