A Poem by ~ Stefanie ~

Kneeling down beside my bed

Hands folded

Head bowed

Eyes closed and breathing steady


Whispers of blessings

upon those hurting

or in need

Quiet thoughts about the

wounded or protection

for those ready to begin battle


Thankfulness for another day of life

and a beautiful sunshiny day

Sorrow for those no longer with us

and the families dealing with pain.


Questions unanswered

Requests inquired


This is faith in the unseen…


© 2011 ~ Stefanie ~

Author's Note

~ Stefanie ~
This is one of my older pieces. I don't think it's my best, but I decided to post it on here anyway. Thank you for reading

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This is really really pleasant! I'm glad you decided to post it. :) Prayer time for me is the most humbling and calming thing. One on one time with God is incredible. Thank you for a wonderful write!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

it's cute and well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

A nice little poem and a good read:) Especially love stanza 3.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I really enjoy this poem. I particularly like how you say "Whispers of blessings
upon those hurting or in need". Sometimes I think people get too wrapped up in their own hardships and problems to pray about anything other than themselves. You show care and generosity through the way you pray (which is pretty awesome!). That's how I interpret it, thanks for sharing! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

I really like this :) Prayer is definitely a powerful thing... and can make beautiful things happen :) Thank you for expressing this in such a simplistic, yet thoughtful manner! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Oh yeah! Prayer...Is such a powerful weapon that a person can have if he faithfully believes in God... :)))
I like this poem...Very optimistic and religious...
Well done! :)))

Posted 10 Years Ago

Prayer is all we have sometime. I like the desire of the poem. We need to hold on to faith and hope. Thank you for a outstanding poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Prayers are funny things I've found...(not literally of course) but the fact that we think that most seem unheard by above or unanswered. In this poem I like your expressive interpretation of prayers said by man most days. Every emotion can be found within a prayer, as you have shown us with your writing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

No matter the age of this pieces creation, it's an amazing work of words. I often find myself saying the same thing to the lord every day. I can feel the empathy and connection that shines through to the heavens. A wonderful work of divine art.


Posted 10 Years Ago

I feel like I needed to read this. It's powerful, even if you don't know it. Great write, hun!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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~ Stefanie ~

Dreamland, DE

Hi, my name is stefanie :) I enjoy writing even though at times I feel like I am not very good at it. But I put my heart into everything I do so I think that makes up for it :) I really enjoy sport.. more..


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