Promises

When a promise is spoken, it is not meant to ever be broken.

No matter what lies ahead,

I promise to be there for you.

 

No matter what was in the past,

I promise to help you forget.

 

No matter what the future holds,

I promise to always love you.

 

You said no matter what lies ahead,

You’d be there for me.

 

You said no matter what went wrong in my past,

You’d be there to help me forget.

 

You said no matter what the future holds,

You’d always love me.

 

Now how come I kept my promises?

But you BROKE every one of yours…

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed this one :) I hope it flowed well and sounded right! Thank you for any ratings or reviews :)

Reviews

[13ReasonsWhy]

I REALLY LIKED IT!! VERY SWEET AND TRUE!

[Amanda Lee/ Isolated Dr..]

Very heartfelt
overall i think this poem could be a lot deeper though; try using metaphors or analogies to say what you mean without actually saying it.
always remember-- STRONG adjectives, verbs, nouns, etc...

[Summer'sBreeze]

i love it!
the flow was just beautiful

[A. L. Allen]

This is so sad! I love the sincerity in it though. Great job!

[WindSong]

Its a lovely young poem from one young at heart. The rhythm flows gently. Very well penned!

WindSong

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

excelent Brava Brava hee hee

[Me]

nice write

[Mary C]

beautiful lines

[Maddie:]]

very heartfelt, and beautiful! i thought it flowed perfectly, and sounded just right. also loved how you put emphasis in the ending with the "BROKE". draws attention to the sad truth, the relationship didn't work out! nice job, well-written as always:]

[Thea]

"Promises are meant to be broken"...They said...For me, it is hard keeping a word or a promise that you're not sure of it because it might just hurt someone's feelings. This poem speaks truth at some points. Great work, Stefanie...
:)))