Someday Soon

Someday Soon

A Poem by ~ Stefanie ~
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One day I hope to see your face again <3

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These tear stains on my face are a permanent tattoo

A reminder of all that I lost when it comes to memories of you

Your sweet and caring ways, your smile and laughter

There no longer is that happily ever after.

I wish I could look into your deep expressive eyes

And really tell you that deserved heartfelt goodbye

I truly loved you with all of my heart

Not one part of me thought we’d be broken apart

You were supposed to be here forever

I did not want you to leave, no never

I know someday soon I will see you again

But until then

I will miss you so much my very special friend

 

These tear stains on my face are a permanent tattoo

A reminder of all that I lost when it comes to memories of you…

 

TRAVIS

© 2011 ~ Stefanie ~


Author's Note

~ Stefanie ~
This is dedicated to a dear friend of mine, Travis, that passed away earlier in the year. I miss him dearly but I know I'll see him again one day. Thank you for taking the time to read, rate, and review. I really appreciate it all :)

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JRB
this was a nicely put write, that i can relate to,,keep up the writes

Posted 12 Years Ago


The perfection of this is so simple, so pure, so untouchable. It stands alone in a glory all its own that no one can find a way to improve it, nor should anyone even try. Words from your heart simply can't be perfected. I particularly liked the imagery of tear stains being a tattoo on your face, imparting the permanence of your grief. That you will miss him until you are reunited once again is self evident. So many can relate to such a tribute. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is sooo good. I can compare myself to this all too well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is so so heartfelt. i really loved it and it touched my heart. *wipes tear* in my favorites. i say no more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can't say it any better than anyone else did: this was an extremely touching poem, beautiful, heartfelt. Even though I didn't know Travis, I know if he could/can see this beautiful poem you have wrote for him, he would think so, too, and he would love it; knowing he is remembered and still loved.
A truly touching and heartfelt piece; I loved every word of it. Outstanding job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can definitely feel your pain for Travis here, you expressed it quite beautifully. Sorry for your loss, I'm sure Travis appreciates you dedicating this beautiful poem to him.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You just broke my heart. :( This was sad and so heartfelt. These were my favorite lines...
"I wish I could look into your deep expressive eyes
And really tell you that deserved heartfelt goodbye"
Oh, and I think it was a brilliant move how you repeated the last two lines. Awesome write. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. I know Travis is happy wherever he is right now just knowing that he is loved by you. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


its really nice and sad but still good

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's very very lovely poem , brought tears to my eyes ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww, this is a sweet piece :). Girl, i bet he's looking down right now and appreciating what you've written for him. Excellently composed. Well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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~ Stefanie ~
~ Stefanie ~

Dreamland, DE



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