Last Day of Our Lives (featuring Cool Girl)

Last Day of Our Lives (featuring Cool Girl)

A Poem by Not here

Dance..
It's party time..

Dance..
Dance..
Gonna have some fun tonight
Dance..

Follow my lead..

Here we go now, 
Down 
Bring it down to the ground
Now up to the sky
Don't beg or cry
Because 
We're gonna have some fun tonight
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Hey
I see you eyeballing 
The man over there
And his chest is bare 
Girl
You're gonna dance with him tonight 
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about 
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)


Stop
Get out of my way
Can't you see
I'm partying
Come on
You're gonna move with us tonight
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Oh!
Let's get in a line
Sway our hips
All in time 
To the music of this song tonight
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)

"Typical teens and tweens, all of those jeans.
Some are green and some are mean, but most of all genes
are running amok all around. They're making such a scene.
Think they're on the big screen? Thinking they're a prom queen?"
Trust me, I heard 'em talking, all around hawking
and just plain mocking us while we're rocking.
What's the point of walking? It's really quite shocking
and I'm just balking. Why not be flocking?
Why not be running? Why not be dancing?
If we're gonna die tonight, why not be prancing
around like a drama queen, maybe in pajamas green.
I'm an inverted con machine, but what does that and so on mean?
Does it even matter? Everyday I'm getting fatter
and looking like the Mad Hatter filling the air with my splatter
coming out from my mouth. Scatter it around like a large platter
of crazy concoctions from my brain on auction.
Trust me, I wouldn't cry if tonight was the night I die
and I never said goodbye. It's alright though because why
should we worry about what's coming? I'd rather just be humming
this song and giving some high fives
because it's the last day of our lives.

Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about 
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)

© 2015 Not here


Author's Note

Not here
This is something me and Cool Girl worked together on, like forming our own two-person band :) Pretty fantastic. Also, since she wrote the bulk and best part of this, it was only appropriate to make the picture a girl

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Take this for what it is as I did your song. The first part for me had me flashing fifties doo-wop and then you go into the RAP. Now I am not saying it does not work and I am sure I am missing the first part by miles. Good use of words Just outside my skill set a bit.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was cool! You can totally tell who wrote what. Awesome job you guys! Reminded me of something out of uptown funk a little, which is totally a good thing. ;D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Marcel! You're so nice! :) lol
this was creative
the concept is something that isn't done alot

this was alot of fun to read

good team-up on it


-Dream

Posted 8 Years Ago


We make an awesome two-person band, don't you think? Lol :) Well..I did write a lot of it, but that doesn't mean it was the best part! You're part was amazing too! Though I guess you're right about making the picture a girl...Go girls! #Feminism :) :) But anyway, I had a great time working with you on this! We should make a whole album of songs! Lol that'd actually be pretty fun...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks :) and i definitely agree. it was a blast
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
This is the best one I've seen throught my whole day, I really love this.
You two did an amazing job writing this song, I would love to hear some tune with it haha!
Most of the bulk is true, I like it.
ITs really good, no surprise from two great writers :)
Awesome work guys!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks lizardo :) thats high praise coming from someone as talented as you
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Yes, thank you! I know that both of us appreciate your kind words :)

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