She (Poem)

She (Poem)

A Poem by Not here
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She Watches All

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She watches all; She watches you.
If she does call, do not go through.
She sees you there; She's looking down.
Within her snare, it is her town.
They try to run; they try to hide.
It has begun. This is a ride.
Lurking along, the streets are dark.
Hearing her song, they lose the spark.
Wishing for peace, they lose their breath.
Finding release, there's only death.

Lonely and hurt, they try to find
peace and strength to help their mind.
Instead of hope, they find the dark.
Instead of joy, they've lost the spark.
Fear is a ride, and it will go
until you lose your mind and know
that turning back is not a choice.
With her hands, she takes your voice.
The town is shrinking over you.
Lies are what you once found true.

Chaos, madness, fear, and hate,
they are the only thing you see.
Darkness covers all your fate,
darkness until eternity.

© 2015 Not here


Author's Note

Not here
The novel I am writing, called She, will be published on amazon sometime by the end of this year. I will put the first handful of chapters on here starting next month. This poem is just something inspired by the book, and a little teaser.

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Your book is on my want to read shelf!!! This poem is awesome and I'm hoping to get your book some time!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thats great :) hopefully its not priced too highly. i can lower the price maybe for a little bit if .. read more
Very good depiction of death. I can really feel the darkness in this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


'Finding release, there's only death.' Literally stopped me in my tracks. The book will, no doubt, be breathtaking.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
I can't wait for the book! xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

:) thanks for the review
This poem leaves the words 'who is she?' to echo in the readers mind. Will find out from your book.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

yep :) thank you for your reviews lately, i really appreciate them
Makes me want to read she and find out more, great teaser and draw!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thank you piper :)
oh and indeed there is truth to this and the reader filled with intense anticipation , loved it and have been there not to long ago actually love the piece and cant wait to see how this book will turn out very great job



Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thank you :) i posted the prologue on here
Oh, I am definitely intrigued to read the first chapters and your book. The poem is very dark and haunting. The protagonist (or is she, now?) is definitely a very grim and terrifying character.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thanks :) im glad you enjoyed reading
A powerful poem. You left me with the need to read and know more. You left a wide open story in the poem. "Chaos, madness, fear, and hate," Can be better than nothing. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

no problem :) thank you for reading
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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Sweet,like a rhyming verse.Flows smoothly throughout

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not here

8 Years Ago

thanks for reading :)

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