Innocent footsteps

Roaming in the vast forest, storm of love on the way.

Tiny rocks under our bare feet, lavender breeze in our faces,

Like school children we chase one another,

Between the ancient trees, under the bold waves of the sky,

You hold my cold hand, warm them with your tender touch

You guide me down the path, into the palace of our dreams

No one can stop us, we will build our own world, a brand new galaxy.

Of green hills, endless books, satin sheets, laced love, and yellow cottages.

We will travel through time, pave the steps to our castle.

Our dreams, our own little personal desire for a thunder storm.

Author's Note

It short and authentic....i may add more later. Anyways review and advise! Thanks...

Reviews

[☯]

This was a really great write, I loved it a lot :)
For the title, I was thinking maybe "Hand in Hand"
Just a suggestion :D

[Conner Is Dead 2/14/1..]

I love the poem its sweet, but the title dont fit, How about "Our innocent Love"
IDK it just seems more appropriate

[trainwreck]

This was a very cute poem. Good job.

[Ashley]

Very beautiful and touching!