Freeing The Pain

 

Unleashing the beast

Means that the lock on my cage

Is truly broken.

Reviews

[Ruth]

And can never be fixed?
Hmm, makes me think ♥

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That might be a good thing, the open cage can be liberating.

[Ruth]

It can indeed :) xo

[Tim]

In a way, we all have a beast within us that gets out once in a while. I think the question is would we want to have two locks from now on as a result? Unleashing the beast doesn't make us happier. However, in certain circumstances, That beast may be just what we need. Good poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much for the feedback.

[Sami Khalil]

Good write...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[April Child]

Ooh the beast is well and truly unleashed. Let your wild out :) Nice energy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The beast went out of his cage, to
Eat the angel.

Like the hue...

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That's a good one... you are funny.

LOL ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wouldn't this be extraordinary~

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That might be debated :)

True! LOL But to truly be ... and not to be
worrying about where the key is! l

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh now you got my mind and tongue twisted... I like it.

OH no untwist those beasts !! lol

[Chris]

THAT was righteous! I was thinking of conscious choices and the aftermath - do we often dare letting the dark out?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Some very interesting thoughts... thank you for the contribution.

[Tree]

A frightening scenerio. For something dark to escape us meant it was never really secure to begin with. That's what I gather. A lot to think about in these three intense verses.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very interesting thoughts.

[Ed Hart]

'unleashing' and 'broken locks' are not the same thing, but either way, you still pay...that kind of freeing the pain is short term, and will come back to you in multiples...best to keep it caged until it knows its place, then it can join the whole of you, but on terms...and it is never in charge...anyway, that's what works for me

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Some good points sir.

[Ed Hart]

you're a good man my friend, and i know you know how these things work

[Rose of Gondor]

Very deep and emotional. This poem tells so much in the space of so little words. The words hold and omnipotence to them, as if, truly, the cage had been broken, and the beast let out, the pain freed. Perhaps, if indeed, one's pain is freed, like the beast in the cage, one will find peace.

A very powerful poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you very much.

[Rose of Gondor]

:D My pleasure!