Spilled Ink

A Chofu- six lines with a 5-2-7-5-2-7 syllable count Inspired by something fellow poet and dear friend Renee Martin said to me.

 

Spilling the ink can

Create

Abstract messes on the floor

That becomes the muse

You have

Been searching for in the sky.

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

There is beauty in everything or so I have learned over the years...It takes an artist's eyes to see it, a poet's words to speak it, a lover's heart to feel it. These kinda poems have so much soul. Very nice work! Your a good listener:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It just takes an open mind and heart to see beauty in everything. Thank you for sharing you wisdom.

[Coyote Poetry]

My wife wouldn't call the ink spill art. Nice use of words create good vision and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir, I am guessing your wife would call it a big mess she has to clean up, LOL

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice to read a Chofu again, but this time with this more interesting subject. Sometimes the things that we see as trashes or messes can help us find what we've been searching for...

Short but relevant. Keep writing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much… glad that you appreciate my thought process here.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.

[DIVYA]

Oh my! This is so beautiful. Where do you get that inspiration from?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I get a lot of my inspiration from talking to other people and things we discuss, like in this case.

[DIVYA]

Sometimes looking down also helps...

You are welcome Dale.

[Marie]

I can see that as a way to start a marvellous art form.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[s y e]

Woo, I loved your take on this one Dale, this is a marvellous poem! I loved how vivid the imagery was and your first line just hooked me!

[Deuces]

Nice... very nice.
The perfection we crave can most likely be found in the messes we create and ignore.

Brilliance, Sir!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very good points you make, thank you.

[Renée]

Oh !! I Love this thought of Yours! A different view, seeing nature within our daily lives, and their lessons unfold even in spilled ink.. It may sound odd, but I think, you captured what happens, when we see and feel though our instincts and minds eye ! To boot you did it in a structured form !! Well Done Poet ! ( :

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the review and adding your great insight. Inspiration like love cmes from the most unexpected places.

[Renée]

It surly does ! The only think keeping me, from pouring some ink on the floor..is.. I would have to be the one to clean it up ! lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, well you know what they say, we take the good with the bad.

[Renée]

Well I had a thought.. oil stains in parking lots might be of interest lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hmmmm… I think you are on to something.

[Stevo The POE-t]

That is one way to take view on things... Maybe I need to think about this poem the next time I sit down to write.. I think the muse behind the noise is what gives fire to our pen... At our strongest point we have the power to create the weak, the broken, the tattered and torn... Great job man

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow, well said sir, very well said, thank you for the feedback.

[Stevo The POE-t]

No problem man thanks for allowing me to read

[icelandicblue]

Your words created an image of a Rorschach test. I like the spilled ink imagery of your words...you never know what will be revealed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.