The Reality

I senryu you

 

You call me your prince

But the reality is

You are my angel.

Reviews

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Awe, I could see this as a quite above a headboard in a bedroom

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh really, I like that thought :)

[s y e]

Awh, such a sweet little sentiment, Dale. A lovely senryu.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well that said it all.This is so sweet Cowboy Dale :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much. Who knew I had a sweet side :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I suspected (shh I won't tell) You are welcome :)

[divya]

A brief yet most beautiful expression of love!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again hon, I try my best.

[Rita L. Sev]

Now THIS is a love poem - simple, sweet and heartfelt. Nicely done, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you, I believe simple is the most sincere way to express love.

[Little Whisper]

Oh gosh... I'm sure you have made your angel very happy.... As happy as she has made you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)))

[Matching Socks]

You are a Senryu rockstar!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, I like that.

[Matching Socks]

I don't Rock often
But when I do rock out, I
Rock out really hard

A little one dedicated to you...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, that is so sweet.

[Matching Socks]

Really? It wasn't meant to be...
I'm so misunderstood. ;) Therefore, I MUST be a poet...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I agree you are a poet, a fine one at that.