Finally

The power of love

I finally see all the beauty

in the simple things of nature.

The wind tickling the leaves

or the rain cleansing a dirty day

ever since I saw the sunlight

caress your angelic face.

 

I finally hear sweet harmonies

from the sounds of everyday.

Birds singing their opera of flight

to the melody of dogs barking

from the moment I heard

you breathe my name.

 

I finally feel the pleasures

of what make life worth living.

That feel of a hot shower

or the soft cotton as I dry myself

since the day you touched

my heart with yours.

 

I finally know the meaning of love

the day our souls connected.

 

Reviews

[Six Impossible Things]

beautiful. simply beautiful. I often wonder that when these moments 'click' for us if it's a glimpse of the other side. Not necessarily heaven, or the afterlife. But that sort of high frequency vibration of energy that is pure love-- I'm positive that sort of thing exists :) Thanks for displaying it so wonderfully.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great imagery in this, cowboy. Wonderfully written, a favorite.

Great Write.

[Mariah]

this is so beautiful hunnn. :)
it had been added to my faovrites. !
i can totally relate, but it makes me quite sad since my love has parted.
but amazing all the same.
:)

[Nicholas Hallows]

This indeed is the power of love. It gives you new eyes and things you would not have noticed before become not only visible but beautiful too. A good, honest write. I like the fact that you use everyday language, nothing pretentious, as even ordinary things are beautiful under the spell of love. NH

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

A wonderful ride through the senses. Good job.
Love All, Mejasha

[Jane Doe]

Simply amazing piece. It is so tender and romantic. It is so true that love changes the way we see everything. Great writing!

[Dani California]

This is beautiful Dale! I think I like this one the best so far..... very wonderful poem about how love can change our entire world. Powerful, creative and well written. Beautifully done :)