Celestial Connection

Celestial Connection

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

 

The deep navy sky takes the form

of infinite possibilities as I watch

the twinkle of the heavenly bodies

staring deep within my soul.

 

This inner connection with them

was written long before birth

for just like their celestial journey

my humanity is from here to eternity.

 

So as I wish upon a star that might have

burned up hundreds of years ago

my love and faith will shine long after

I am called beyond this atmosphere.

© 2011 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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May our spirits live forever more.... and they will because we are all of one spirit.

This is beautiful and powerful! We are connected to all that exists, now and forever, yet we feel separated most of the time. Though, only because we choose it that way.

Great work! Definitely a favorite cowboy :)



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Very beautiful, well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the idea of life as having infinite possibilities and I really like how you brought the planets in as being influential to us. I'm into astrology, and I can say that they really do have an impact on how we feel and act. Just ask any nurse in the ER during a full moon!

This is a beautiful piece, like so many other of your pieces, and I really, really liked this one.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This inner connection with them
was written long before birth
for just like their celestial journey
my humanity is from here to eternity.

Oh wow Dale this was deep, very deep. Your words burns the soul, as the longing floats within our minds. This piece really was too beautiful for words, so yeah, I am a bit speechless....
Which personally I think is great, just proves what a amazing piece you have here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

fantastic piece of writing rock star... loved it

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I loved this! I'm usually not a fan of romantic poems but I liked the airy quality of this one. A deep and infinite meaning behind your words with so much imagery!

This inner connection with them
was written long before birth

absolutely beautiful!

Brette

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a good poem. It has a spiritual and mystical
feel to it. Keep up the good work. AD

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

May our spirits live forever more.... and they will because we are all of one spirit.

This is beautiful and powerful! We are connected to all that exists, now and forever, yet we feel separated most of the time. Though, only because we choose it that way.

Great work! Definitely a favorite cowboy :)



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

they say stars hold secrets and answers as they govern us in life. a different write for you, I like it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of Ziggy Stardust or the man who fell to earth. The looking into you looking far away makes me lean in to listen for distant celestial voices, especially the excellent use of the word atmosphere. You are an earth based supernova. Shine with abandon!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very deep thought provoking word here my friend. Your thoughts spilled upon a page to allure the thoughts of all those who choose to read this piece. I really like this piece and the ideas it places in my mind. Your words are a great inspiration.



Well DOne!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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