An Ode About Independence Day

An Ode About Independence Day

 

 

 

This is the day

Where the streets run red…

White and blue

In the form of Americans

Celebrateing the birth

Of this great nation.

 

So don’t look down

For in the sky

On this night

Is wear our pride

Is bursting in air

Just like the ones

In the theme song

To the place

Where we all belong.

 

Friends, Fdmily, and neighbors.

Oh and even strangers

Come together as one

To recognize the freedom

We are free to celebrate

Thanks to the heroes

We will never

Get the chance to meet.

 

So lets raise a toast

And light the fireworks

While deep in our hearts

We play tribute

To those who potect our right

To bleed red, White, and blue.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful expression of patriotism and pride in one's country. The imagery of the streets running red, white, and blue is particularly striking, and it sets the tone for the rest of the poem. I also appreciate the way you've woven in references to the national anthem and the Fourth of July celebrations, as it helps to create a sense of unity and shared experience. The final stanza, where you raise a toast and light fireworks while paying tribute to those who protect our rights, is especially moving, as it reminds us of the sacrifices that others have made so that we can enjoy the freedoms we have today. Overall, I think this poem is a wonderful tribute to America and all that it stands for.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you agsin

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.
"So lets raise a toast
And light the fireworks
While deep in our hearts
We play tribute
To those who potect our right
To bleed red, White, and blue."
Powerful and strong words. I still love the Red, White and Blue. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this poem of how this holiday that celebrates this great nation’s birthday bring community, family and friends together. A freedom we enjoy and keeping enjoying because of those that serve our country. My son is a Marine.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank You So Much. And tell your Son thank you for his servicee.

[Poetic Beauty]

I definitely will tell him.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, we are thankful for those who keep us safe and independent!
Nice tribute here, I will be looking up tomorrow night.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Happy I independence Day Jacob

[Relic]

A worthy tribute, Cowboy. Freedom is one of the greatest things about our country. We should all thank the people who gave us that right.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got that right. Thank you