Afternoon Sunroof.

Afternoon Sunroof.

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

Afternoon Sunroof



Look over the ocean

at the sun setting

like it does everyday.


Look at the rays 

not in disarray,

For it creates a roof

over the ocean

that doesn’t block the sky.


instead it accents the beauty

that lies between

the earth and blue ceiling

in the house that God built.


though. Soon it will will be gone

when the sun hides behind the skyline

while waiting on another day.

But the beauty will always remain

to those fortunate to see the glory

dnd have the heart

to apreciate natural magnificent. 

© 2024 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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This poem reflects on how natural phenomena can accentuate the splendor of the world and invoke appreciation in those who are willing to observe it.

The phrase "house that God built" suggests a spiritual dimension, inviting readers to consider the divine aspect of the natural world.

A very beautiful poem, I enjoyed it alot.

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Weeks Ago

thank you so much. I'm glad to hear that.
Amy R

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome.
You place a gold star on the sun, as you should because its beauty shines all over our universe...and to see it rise and fall is a truly magnificent moment in the book of nature....one can still see the sky and the moon...and the sun also gives us energy in addition to its magnificence..... beautiful write!
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


your poem blesses me with a call to appreciate .. not take for granted .. and the sun not blocking but accentuating the wondrous and beautiful .. blessed in this reading experience Cowboy!
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Month Ago

thank you very much. glad you liked it.
Beautiful imagery in this wonderfully descriptive piece of writing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

1 Month Ago

thank you so much

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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