Now that's just sweet! i like using the ocean (sea, beach, what-have-you) as representation of people, you know this, because it just works. you can take so much from the natural wonder and apply it to life, people, love, anything really. And here you've molded and crafted this into the heart- and it's flawless! i'm rambling i know it- but i like to talk about things i adore, and this quallifies!
Now that's just sweet! i like using the ocean (sea, beach, what-have-you) as representation of people, you know this, because it just works. you can take so much from the natural wonder and apply it to life, people, love, anything really. And here you've molded and crafted this into the heart- and it's flawless! i'm rambling i know it- but i like to talk about things i adore, and this quallifies!
What a beautiful calming piece. I am not sure what is up so many of my dear friends are upset. Why do people have to hurt others. This is a beautiful piece. I loved the calm imagery.
WOW cowboy, this was sensational. The imagery was fantastic. The flow wonderful and the content extraordinary. It started off strong and kept going. My favorite lines....
The tides whispering words
Of hope and inspiration
And suddenly my soul was calm
So serene and beautiful these lines. I love this piece. Outstanding!!!!
Beautiful imagery I can relate to easily. Living beside the ocean, I also tend to use metaphors derived from intimacy with the tides, raging storms, and the calm flow that follows. Great job!
The oceans offer such soothing sounds and serene atmospere
calming the human mind and spirit~ THanks for sharing this lovely piece
wonderfully penned as always~Fran
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
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Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
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my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..