Aw, this is so beautiful and heart warming. I do love a good romantic poem, and this will be the one of the day! Well done. makes me wish that my boyfriend was a poet and not a story writer.
Sounds wonderfully romantic Dale, we should all be lucky enough to be able to nurture REAL romance, no pretense! Because there is nothing more comforting than being in the care of a romantic who is genuine :-)
Beautifully expressed!
Helen~
A wise man knows when he had a diamond. His eye will only see her and nobody else. A very good poem. A excellent ending to a very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Oh sooooo romantic, cleverly put together too .. what a combination! You go from theme to theme, alter direction, visits here so often come up with the best surprises.
Best of this, such soft love: 'That is how I have ~ Come to see ~ These magical enigmas… ~ Since you came ~ Into my life.'
(Apologies, been such an infrequent reviewer recently, will return, promise)
Ohhh this was sweet and so pure.. Oh my is it love? Too cute.. I liked this one, really did.. You have that way about you that makes a romantic piece scream out with the most fab touches..
It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool
About
Birth name: Dale Deadmond
Born November 20th, 1969
Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate.
This is my world of
my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..