Since You

Getting in touch with my romantic side

Every four leaf clover

Is nothing more

Then a part of nature’s turf.

 

If I had a rabbit’s foot

It would merely be

Something fuzzy in my pocket.

 

To throw a penny

Into a fountain

Is just a way to waste money.

 

I still find rainbows

Genuinely beautiful

But lacking any real substance.

 

That is how I have

Come to see

These magical enigmas…

 

Since you came

Into my life.

 

For I could never be luckier

Then having your heart

Beat with mine.

Reviews

[Ebb and Flow]

Aw, this is so beautiful and heart warming. I do love a good romantic poem, and this will be the one of the day! Well done. makes me wish that my boyfriend was a poet and not a story writer.

Krystina

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what a interesting way of seeing things..unique in your approach, was well written and eloquently put...

[Desert Dreamer]

It is amazing how so many things fade away when we experience love.

[Helen Woodward]

Sounds wonderfully romantic Dale, we should all be lucky enough to be able to nurture REAL romance, no pretense! Because there is nothing more comforting than being in the care of a romantic who is genuine :-)
Beautifully expressed!
Helen~


Helen~

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise man knows when he had a diamond. His eye will only see her and nobody else. A very good poem. A excellent ending to a very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[emmajoy]

Oh sooooo romantic, cleverly put together too .. what a combination! You go from theme to theme, alter direction, visits here so often come up with the best surprises.

Best of this, such soft love: 'That is how I have ~ Come to see ~ These magical enigmas… ~ Since you came ~ Into my life.'


(Apologies, been such an infrequent reviewer recently, will return, promise)

[Norma M Sutton]

I started reading this as love lost and then the end changed lol. Nicely written.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Aw, this is definitely sweet. I really like this side of your poetry, definitely write more! (: Loved it.

[Magdelena]

Ohhh this was sweet and so pure.. Oh my is it love? Too cute.. I liked this one, really did.. You have that way about you that makes a romantic piece scream out with the most fab touches..

Mags xx

[Marie Harrison]

Very whimsical and romantic write. Could be love...