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A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

 

A shining star heart

And Olympic torch passion

Simply cause of you.

© 2010 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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This is such a beautiful piece filled with captivating feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and simple, but the points clear as day, Great work, loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice. I see you've been hooked too lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awwww. I love this! Everyone wants to be loved this way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is differant from what i'm used to reading by you, and I must say, I like it : )
I have always liked haiku, because it is short,simple, and to the point. This was no exeption, You convyed so much love and passion in this, its unreal

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'd say that's quite the find :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


These three lines tell such a great story of love and passion in an erotically charged symbolic.
Beautifully done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this was excellent...so beautiful and so well done...

Posted 13 Years Ago


concentrated words of admiration expressed beautifully

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A few words. A beautiful story. A excellent short poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 5 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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