Sewing To You

A senryu Yes I know that sow and sew are different, just a play on words.

 

You reap what you sow?

Then I am gonna stitch me

A picture of you.

Reviews

[Dye]

I love the play on words, a clever Senryu indeed. Very creative and witty.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, that was a real fun one to come up with.

[Lily Mae]

Well I love your play on words as always. Your mind is so creative and unique. I love what's in that heart and head of yours..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... play on words is so much fun.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice wordplay. Such a clever line........though you can also say "rip what you sew" as a statement in Garments which is supported by the next lines, you played here the quote "Reap what you sow" to make a thought that what will you do with the picture is just for revenge.
Well-penned, Cowboy!

[KAOlmsted]

Oh I love this...seriously LOVE it. You rock, Dale. That's why you're the Rock and Roll Cowboy ;-)

xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thanks Vacker... now what can I stitch for you?

[KAOlmsted]

Jamie Bamber, please xD My pleasure, Dale ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Darn I thought you were gonna say a cowboy, LOL

[KAOlmsted]

mmm...Jamie Bamber in chaps? Yup ;-) Meanwhile, don't tempt me, kid ;-) xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I am tempting you... whatcha gonna do about it?

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be nice if it was this easy. To stitch up dreams and know happiness. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it would be nice... thank you sir.

[emmajoy]

So clever, Dale, so like the use of words, like the clever change of that one word, a ripe use of the senryu discipline and all adding up to very happy visit.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much classy lady.

[DIVYA]

How sweet....
Loved the idea and the feeling.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks beautiful.

[DIVYA]

:) You are the best.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No, you are xo

[DIVYA]

Thanks and hugs! And a mwaaaaaah! :)

[Melanie Genevieve]

This is an awesome haiku :D love the play on words love the idea. I love when so much is said in so few words ahh :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually it is a senryu but thank you, I love the challenge of saying so much in a few words.

[Melanie Genevieve]

soorrry =X

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Don't be sorry, just letting you know... they both have the same syllable counts, just a haiku is about weather or nature and a senryu is about any other topic.

[Holly Mason]

well then ....now i am in stitches...cause that is one big word smile*)
thank you for sharing fine rock and roll sir

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always glad when you smile.

[Emily B]

if i could think of a way to stitch a mess of green beans and new potatoes and corn on the cob . . . i bet it takes a special kind of thread though :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am sure it does.