My Louvre Shines Bright For You

The hopeless romantic strikes again with his metaphors

Give me your shadow

And I will treat it like a canvas,

Painting it with all the bright colors

From the pigments of my spirit.

For you are the muse

That makes all my artwork

Personally priceless.

Your soul hangs proudly

In every chamber of my heart,

Making it feel like the most valuable gallery

In the world,

And that is why I Louvre You so much.

Reviews

[Kai Rollins]

The shadow is a canvas....that's so innovative. That's so...beautiful. Lovely write

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again, appreciate your kind thoughts.

[kublakhan27]

I love the idea of the shadow as a canvas, as opposed to the body...a sweet and lovely work, nicely done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much

[Emily]

I like your wording! Well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem my friend. Create vision and place. I like the use of the language. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so kindly sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[gabrielle]

the heart and the Louvre...ah, what a fitting analogy. Romantic and yeah, cheesy too. But you got me smiling in here. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe why thank you… I am a hopeless romantic with a hint of cheesy, glad you liked it.

[Enigmatic Amor]

I love the symbolism in this poem. You are right on the money with your juxtaposition of art with love.

The last line...corny! You crack me up, lol.

I think you should do two poems. One more corny for that ending and one serious. The rest of this poem is too good to waste on a cheesy line....truly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, I am working on my art form of the metaphor… yes I can be corny sometimes, even cheesy, and proud of those facts. SO glad you enjoyed it

[Honey-Bee]

I like this! Very intriguing...give me your shadow And I will treat it like a canvas,Painting it with all the bright colors Nice!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again, glad you enjoyed it.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Cowboy, this one makes me smile. You are a silly romantic! Beautiful and sweetly penned. Bravo!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I am and proud of it… trying to step up my metaphoric refernces to a new level.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Well, you are doing a great job of it! And it is a pleasure to read....:)

[MsJewel]

You are a hopeless romantic. I like that about you.
Your poem is stunning.
:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you Julie for the compliment on my poem and bout me… my grandparents wee married for over 75 years so it runs in my blood.

[Tree]

Inspiration in this form does seem to take on the aura of light, it seeps into your being. You have to take advantage of these rare moments, and create. I like how you compared this muse to a great work of art, or the "blank canvas," on which to create. And maybe, the muse –– the love, really is like a grand, museum. All these ideas all these great rooms, to explore.... To gaze at.

Dreamy piece, Dale. Makes us dream

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sir, appreciate the kind feedback.