Erotic Teacher

A bad senryu

Naughty, naughty girl

Turning erotic desires

Into my talent.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is just bad, bad, bad! Not bad as a senryu, mind you, just bad in the promise that never came to fruition. Here I see this title, "Erotic Teacher," and I'm all set to read the most epic erotic poem ever only to find a nibble, a tidbit, a tease. LOL!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Sorry, didn't mean to tease you... or maybe I did ;)
Thank you.

[jeannemarie coulter]

excellent short poem...poetry challenges us to communicate huge ideas in as few words as possible...your poetry does this very well

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you... glad you think so.

[MsJewel]

We find our muse in many places....
Cute and clever Cowboy!

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes we do darling Julie. Thank you :)

[Relic]

I must abstain from any poems that are erotic. {good poem though} :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, a smile here...it's her fault...she made me do it....

j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I understand Jacob.

[~]

chuckle chuckle :D
thirst is always with the ones who deal in hot business :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true :)

[Erotic Goddess]

Dirty, dirty boy
Playing with words and fantasy
Roll those naughty dice

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... and I will roll those dice, for it is worth the gamble.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I think we all may have had at least ONE teacher in school we wished would have been a... naughty one. Haha.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yeah I always did too.