Sunryu

As senryu... Funny fact, the text I had to type to post this was "heatable" LOL

 

Warmth brings life anew

As wild seeds are brought to life

In mom’s shiny womb.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

The title is a flash of brilliance! To me, this is haiku becuz it's about nature (whereas senryu is about human nature) . . . but I still love the title becuz people interchange these words all the time. The most unusual part is the last line, as I had to think a bit to figure out why "shiny" . . .

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are right, but it could also be how you view the poem, Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. Always appreciated.

[Ana Papaya]

a perfect springtime poem, great positive energy and a sweet innocence.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Ana... a sweet innocence from me, that is unheard of :)

[Ana Papaya]

LOL. True! Must be a trap!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I like the last line- it is childlike, innocent, and happy. I see this poem as something a little child would enjoy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I really like how you see it... thank you.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Spring forward as that stupid time change thing tells us. Nice work here.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir for all four reviews.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not a problem at all. Your work was needed today.

[Corset]

This could go either was as perception warrants , mother as Gaia, could be argued as a haiku as well, aren't you the clever one :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well, thank you for thinking I am clever :)

[An owl on the moon]

So much coming alive here already with the warmth, and your words awaken joy in the soil and honor in every sacred mother.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.