Four Seasons Under God

Every summer has its similarities,

Every summer has its differences,

Every other season follows that same path.

Mother nature gives birth to each one once a year,

Mother nature lets them all go honor freewill.

God oversees it all but has no control,

God is responsible for these miracles.

 

Reviews

[Corset]

I'm often struck by the "stages" of life, how they cycle much like the seasons do, each of us doing virtually the same steps to enlightenment and yet each one as unique as the person who lives them! I enjoyed reading ya R&R , hope you are having a great day!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for such great insight. I am doing great, hope you are too.

[avant security guard]

yeah, I like the seasons
they make you wonder
I like the shortest day of the year in the middle of winter that reminds you that each day will get longer,
and eventually warmer
good poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

A morning prayer of recognition to go with my java. ALways a reminded that humble is good and friends are worthy. Thanks Cowboy for the peek inside. Happy Monday!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for appreciating my words.

[kitty]

I strongly believe He is responsible for miracles. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So glad you,like it. Thank you for reading.

[kitty]

My pleasure!

[barleygirl]

Your memorial to the seasons feels a little formal to me, like some old wizard spouting life lessons to a flock, it has the feel of an oratory. Everything you say is thought-provoking, too. Your observations are to think about, rather than to imagine in a sensory way (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so kindly Margie. Appreciate your thoughts.

[MomzillaNC]

Well penned. God gifted us with natural and intellectual abundance, and with free will, so He chooses not to exert control because we have free will.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got it exactly... thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :D

[An owl on the moon]

Smiling, feeling the seasons awakening in me through each line. All that flows through them speaks into us, and lets us mark our own souls as well. Miracles indeed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you very much my friend.

[sette]

i love the poem and there is the clear message for every reader to read or see

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[John the Baptist]

I liked the Ecclesiasteslike philosophy of the first five lines, but the last two threw me. How can God have no control but at the same time be responsible for the miracles?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The answer lies in one word, freewill