In The Rain

Rain is so romantic

  

When I see your face in the rain

it is more mesmerizing then

a rose covered in morning dew

with your natural beauty

making nature green with envy.

 

When I kiss your lips in the rain

they become the juices of life

that I savor on my tongue

just like a fine red wine

shared by soul connecting candlelight.

 

When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

that surronds me with its passionate flow

and consumes every crevice of my body

with its sensual flow and bubbling desire.

 

When we make love in the rain

you become my erotic ocean

that sweeps me away

in your current of ecstasy

to my own fantasy island.

 

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven

bringing new life to my lonely planet.

 

Author's Note

The rain is so romantic

Reviews

[Dani California]

And Like the rain you are a miracle from heaven
bringing new life to my lonely planet.

Very sensual, romantic write. There is something about the rain and water in general that can be so exotic and passionate. But beyond that, rain being the metaphor for love and passion as two spirits and bodies connect, washing away the loneliness..... is penned beautifully

.. as always

[An owl on the moon]

This is a powerful, rhythmic song of wild wonderful loving. Your words are full of intense love, passion, and those sweet reflections clothed in rain. Looked at some of those who have read over the years, and realizing how much I'm missing them here. So glad you've stayed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir. Good to still have you around as well.

[An owl on the moon]

At my age, it's good to still be around. ;)

[Hoskinsish]

Wonderful poem. It makes me wish it would rain.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you. I wish that too.

[Fran Marie]

When we make love in the rain
you become my erotic ocean
that sweeps me away
in your current of ecstasy
to my own fantasy island.


This entire poem is ever so sensual and romantic it's hard to pick a favorite verse

but the above lines are so defined in the overall meaning~ just sweeps one away

into that fantasy island mode~Lovely!!

[Georgia Gypsy]

I have to agree, the rain is so very romantic!! This poem is wonderful!! I love all the verses, everything moves like a beautiful love story.
Great piece!!

[MagiCrystal]

When our bodies meet in the rain

yours becomes a graceful waterfall

Those are lines out of a Novel..two raindrops made with one soul, one mind, one love...
Bravo..
it's is so lovely

[Bud]

Yes, I must agree. When the rain is viewed such as this, there is no denying romance at all. You have penned a wonderful moment in the rain. As only a Talented pen can do.

[Helena]

Rain is romantic, so is this poem and so are you!
Truly beautiful write Dale to bring magic to my dull
day of ordinary rain here today! ~ Helena :)

[cilla]

The rain can be beautifully romantic and wow ... so can you! Rainy days were truly meant for lovers and you capture that feeling do well ....

"When our bodies meet in the rain
yours becomes a graceful waterfall"

Your words are graceful and enchanting leaving one to wish that the sun would go away and the clouds roll in. Rainy days, rainy nights ... with the one you love. Yes. Very well done.

[Jillian]

very sensual write, I love it.

When I kiss your lips in the rain
they become the juices of life
that I savor on my tongue
just like a fine red wine
shared by soul connecting candlelight.

Give me chills. Great job!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

hummmmmmm... yes but...... it must be a summer rain...or i will be cold! te he...x0x00x
love this one...mucho calente aqi x 0x0x0x0