TOUCH

TOUCH

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

For my darling Laura

"

  

You touch my mind

with such true thoughts and opinions

that expands my intellectual stimulus

into a galaxy of stars.

 

You touch my deepest desires

with wild animalistic urges

that the embers of my sexuality

stays burning bright like the Olympic torch.

 

You touch the most sacred part of my heart

with a love so unrestrained

that being with you is like

running free with no fences or walls.

 

You touch my sentimental soul

with a devoted friendship

that you understand what makes

my emotional clock chime every hour.

 

Your touch has become

my sanctuary… my religion… my passion…

 

MY FOREVER AND A DAY!!

 

© 2008 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Dale, this is absolutely breath taking. Absolutely perfectly written. The recipient of this beautiful, declaration of love is one lucky lady. To be written a poem of this magnitude would be an honor worth more than gold.
Perfection Dale. Outstanding job.

Jean

This is my all time time favorite.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Your touch has become my sanctuary...my religion... my passion...

I loved this. It was raw and emotional and beautiful. Don't give up... what's there worth living if you give up? Fighting is the point of living, especially for love.

Posted 14 Years Ago


THIS JUST COMPLETELY TOOK MY BRETH AWAY ITS BEAUTIFUL AND ROMANTIC AND JUST WOW AGAIN YOUR LOVE FOR WHO EVER IT IS , IS GIVING YOU SUCH DEVOTION TO WRITE SO WONDERFULY, KEEP THEM COMMING I AM JUST BLOWN AWAY BY THE WORDS THAT I AM SURE YOUR TRUE LOVE WOULD FEEL THE LOVE AND BE TOUCHED AND GREATFUL TO HAVE YOU IN THERE LIFE...GOD BLESS DALE GREAT JOB...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JC
Sex is about the physical but love, is about the psyche.

I really liked how you used the word "touch" to describe not a physical act but one of emotion. Good flow and imagery.

The third stanza is my favorite.

Thanks for the invite.... JC

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a truly beautiful expression of love for someone. I had someone in my own life who did the same thing for me; for you to still have it is a blessed thing. Cherish it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwwwww
my name is Laura! heehee


No really this was beautiful! I had a really bad toe curl on this one! ;0)
thanks for asking me to read this one. I enjoy your prespective....you are one of the readers I like to stay up to date with.

Cheers,lea LAURA

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet. I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully beautiful and breath taking. It is a well written declaration of love.
Gosh, those cowboys are usually so quiet, but when they speak, man shut up and listen.

Best,
Lee

Posted 15 Years Ago


oh wow... she is really lucky. I wish a guy would describe me like that... well.. not ALL lke that hahaha.

once again. A wonderful write!

God Bles
-M

Posted 15 Years Ago


The sentiment of this poem is very sweet and you've chosen some good imagery and descriptions of your emotions. I had a little truoble with the flow. First stanza might flow better if you put a comma after opinions, then use "they expand". Second Stanza-
You touch my deepest desires
with wild animalistic urges,
causing the embers of my sexuality
to burn brightly, like an olympic torch.
Fourth stanza-
You touch my sentimental soul
with a devoted friendship,
you understand what causes
my emotional clock to chime every hour.

Love the last three lines of your poem! Hope you take my suggestions in the spirit they are given! Barbara

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel a bit voyeuristic reading this....but it is beautifully penned.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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