The Balance Of Nature

  

A soft off shore breeze

Refreshes the spirit

As soul searching waves

Crash against the rocks.

The balance of nature

Is in full effect

Bringing the good with the bad.

So even when the heart

Is sinking like a stone

The soul is free as a bird.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Brilliant metaphors in comparison to being human.. a real feeling and flow of self-discovery pours out as well in this inspirational write! As we truly can compare those waves to so many elements that plague us and crash at the great barriers of our souls... bringing the good with the bad.. embracing everything in everyday life.. so much can be found in this writing that may be short but full of meaning! Thank you so much for sharing... divine and profound! =)

[cest la vie]

What a delightful poem. Yes, even when our heart is sinking, we can continue to rise. Very nice piece!!

[Melissa Kesead]

This is achingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. It brought me a picture of peace but also joy.

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

"So even when the heart
Is sinking like a stone
The soul is free as a bird." how i love those last 3 lines!! such a simple but a beautiful & powerful piece. intense imagery that really makes you feel like your standing there, listening to the waves, feeling the breeze. getting in touch with nature is a very spiritual experience, & can lift the spirits. now uve made me wish i was standing on a beach somewhere, letting nature heal me. such a gorgeous write, going in my favorites.

[Southern Siren]

This transported me back to a time when I used to go down by the water to reflect on things when I was upset. When my mind and heart were tangled up, the perfect flow of nature somehow lightened the load and put things into perspective for me. Well written.

[LonelySoul]

so many poems spring to my mind in reply to all the many visions you've created here,thanx for sharing. d:?)

[Brianna Brie]

I like all of your chosen metaphors twisted together with wisdom. Brilliant!

[Anita B Jacques]

So right you are my friend, I just deleted my last poem, in the trash where it belongs, with the relationship. And I'm feeling much better, as God said "they may kill your body but never your Soul. Thank you sweetie for sharing your awesome write. I hope someday I can write a few words worth keeping again.

[Bud]

Another Brilliant write from a Brilliant and Talented author!

[Kerri Maniscalco]

i read this three times and it just keeps getting better and better. I love it, so beautifully written and filled with powerful natural elements. I really liked the imagery of being on the beach mulling about a situation. I could almost hear the seagulls crying in the distance. I'm going to read it again!