To Love Thy Lady Shakespearian Style

To Love Thy Lady Shakespearian Style

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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A fun attempt at a different style.

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To truly love one's soul fully

Is to let your passion burn

Like eternity has come and gone,

Appreciate every ounce of beauty

Flowing from thee truest one’s heart,

Memorize every line, curve, smile

So when separated by miles

They are never more then a blink away.

Let not false distractions

Of mundane duties nor flesh of strangers

Cast sins upon your heavenly devotion,

Layin' it to rest in the depths of hell.

For when the one

That brings out heaven within

Thy heart like a prayer answered

They should be worshiped not forsaken

Or life shall become a self-purgatory.

 

 

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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It sounds like what to do with a great love once u find it you hold on to it treat as if the best thing u cant live without however for if "forsaken ....life will become a self purgatory" Powerful poem! It touches on many levels of what language used to be about when the language was love such as Romeo and Juilet!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very well written!! Too bad not everyone feels this way!! This is another great example of how talented you are!! You get better and better the more I read on!! Keep it up!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have to agree!! Whole-heartily.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the almost biblical line structure of this, very proverbial and by association, powerful. And the sentiments are so true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It sounds like what to do with a great love once u find it you hold on to it treat as if the best thing u cant live without however for if "forsaken ....life will become a self purgatory" Powerful poem! It touches on many levels of what language used to be about when the language was love such as Romeo and Juilet!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Well done, Dale. I liked this one. Where would anyone be without the women in life? Beautiful work!

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. wow, very interesting and fascinating rendition ... and intense too ... and i agree ... the memorizing tip is a very potent one ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love Shakespeare. I think you did wonderful with the style change. (: It is an amazing poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So very true.... this should be printed on billboards and inside hearts everywhere!
~♥~

Posted 13 Years Ago


The self-purgatory can leave us in a bad place. The poem started with gentle and kind statements. You change the flow and open the door to why we shall pay for all sins in the end. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


its so different but love it how creative of You Smart writing

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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