Made In (Insert Country Here)

Been reading Dean Koontz Frankenstein series... this popped into my head... but the poem is not about Frankenstein

Created with perfect parts

Sewn together with precision,

Still designed by man.

The stitches show

Your first imperfections,

The stitches coming out

Will reveal the rest.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Wow.

Deeply captivated ~ With such perfect words.

[CrushedPepperMinTCHrist..]

:))

[emmajoy]

Truth in few words perfectly placed .. nothing like the hands of a human being to create something that lasts .. think 'samplers'! As to humans themselves andtheir imperfections: everyone has a flaw or two that's what makes us so darn lovable, hopefully. Not sure we're as easy to put back together, to make whole. However, to love is to understand that perfection is the greatest flaw of all.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Rock and Roll Cowboy, its been so long since I've seen you as Midnight Rose. Still a talented writer, I see. Nicely done. :)


~Anna Rose

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Quite thought provoking, I like the meaning behind it. A simple prose, very relevant to the situation our world is in today. I come from a part of the world where most products are made.

[Becky C Strukamp]

what's behind the scene, hidden from view, till at last, shall we see..to be continued


My son reads Dean Koonz, an excellent author!!

[EMMIE]

THIS IS WHAT I LIKE TO CALL SHORT & SWEEEETTTTTTTTTT. HA HA. WONDER WHAT "THE REST" WOULD LOOK LIKE. LOVE THIS ONE!

[Ladysue]

oh Dale, this is brilliant wording here...so much truth and filled with so much wisdom.. :)

[Liza]

the perfection bursting at the seams :)