Powerless

God has no power here,

Here deep in my heart.

It's black, void, and oh so dead.

 

Darkness is my fuel,

Light is what kills me.

When darkness is fufilled,

None will be as cold.

When light is gone,

I'll be forever free.

 

I shall fall to my knees,

With a knife through my chest.

Slowly freeing the darkness from me.

This is it,

My last day.

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I'm sorry but I beg to differ, God had a power over you if only you accept His reaching hand. It would do you good if you wanted to be enlightened on some things.

No offense but this is just something that I felt like saying, God was always there for everybody and He won't abandon us. Sometimes, we're even the ones who are abandoning Him

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

I understand that, I am Christian and all, but my beliefs are different then most. I look more on the side of, well here I'll give you an example. "If God made light, that means there was only darkness before. Doesnt that mean that we were all born from darkness and that God the greaatest of all Darknesses."

[Rhianne Ney]

Oh, I see I never question that so I don't have any thoughts to share

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Thats just how my dad and I are. :p

[Rhianne Ney]

I see, (:

[♪Barklight♪]

great meaning behind words

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

I was slightly sad, and this is how i felt. I love the way that I write what im feeling, and im not ashamed of it. (I just think it sucks) :p

[♪Barklight♪]

nah, you find interesting ways of writing things. you should be proud of your poetry

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

I am, but you know what they say : "We are our own worst critics..." :p

[♪Barklight♪]

true