Diamante

Diamante

A Poem by Dearantlers

Work

Hard, strenuous

Toil, labor, strive

Effort, industry, tranquility, quiet

Pause, recline, still

Easy, calm,

Rest

© 2011 Dearantlers


Author's Note

Dearantlers
Diamante poems are diamond shaped. You have a noun on top, then two adjectives, then three verbs, then on the middle line you have two nouns for the first word on top, and then two more nouns that go with the word on bottom. Once you get the two nouns for the first noun, than you in reverse order. It's kind of confusing, and I'm horrible at explaining things, so I made it more confusing, but maybe seeing it will help!

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I'm really impressed. It all works, and it's not just random adjectives and nouns thrown together. I did like how it reversed, it showed a progression.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diamentes are fun to do....nicely donE!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The adjectives in this are very insightful. Many duplicitous meanings. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! That's really good! You haven't made it more confusing, you've made it clearer by explaining it! I've never seen anything like this before :) Amazing. x

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool i have never seen a poem like this we haven't done them in school yet

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i remember writing on of these in 8th grade lol i always liked writin them,. but im ntoo lazy anyways i liked it a lot great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...Cute write & so amazing. Alot said in such a few words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true! That's definitely describing my job, lol. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love Diamante poetry. I wrote one once. It started with Mother and ended with Father. I have no idea what happened to it though. This is a great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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