The Prophesy of Elanhill

The Prophesy of Elanhill

A Poem by Dearantlers
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Wrote this for a group. Ain't that great.

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When the battles rage,

And Elanill is lost,

The two children of men,

Shall come forth.

The elves reunite,

The dwarves reappear,

The fairy’s magic restored,

And the birds voice returned.

The children of men come together,

And the prophesy has begun.

By night they look one way,

By day they look another,

At dawn they look together,

At dusk they look apart.

The dragons then will come,

And the riders atop,

To help Elanill,

Defeat the foes.

The elves and dwarves,

Fight side by side,

And the fairy’s and birds

Come together.

They work away their pasts,

Their arguing forgotten.

With death in the air,

The foes shall retreat,

The swords stop their ringing,

And the prophesy,

              Will be complete

 

Side note: Prophesy can be spelled Prophesy and Prophecy. Either one works.

© 2012 Dearantlers


Author's Note

Dearantlers
This is so not very good, and I'm horrible at fantasy, but it works. It's a prophesy, though not a very good one, but oh well. It works.

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I really liked this~ prophecy is spelled wrong, the wrong form of fairies is used, and I'm not sure if you meant the spacing to be like that for the last line. but besides that, i think this poem is perfection~ You should submit it to some contests if you haven't already! There are some fantasy contests that would really appreciate this!

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it is great sounds like something out of the lord of the rings i would really belive jrr tolkien wrote it if it was in one of his books

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i love it it is like what i am writing

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....deep powerful piece. like it. I think it's great.

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