Love in Verbs and Pronouns

Love in Verbs and Pronouns

A Story by Dearantlers

I looked, I saw. He looked, he saw. I waved, he winked. I winked, he waved. I walked, he walked. He stopped, I stopped. I stared he talked. He stared, I talked. I smiled, he grinned. We walked, we talked. We grinned, we smiled. We sat, we ate, he paid. We flirted, we kissed. I walked, he walked, I looked he saw. I smiled, I waved. He winked, he grinned…

 

 

I walked, he stared. I stopped, I cried. I vowed, he vowed. We kissed. They cheered, we smiled. They smiled, we cheered. We lived, we laughed, we cried, we loved.

© 2012 Dearantlers


Author's Note

Dearantlers
I did this for a contest. I only could use verbs and pronouns, so it's not that awesome. Suggestions would be awesome! If you didnt get what happened, they got married, but I understand if you didn't, cause I've never written a love story before.

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This was awesome! It sounds like quite a hard contest, but I think you did very well in it :) It's all true as well! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good. Sounds like lyrics to a song.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you skipped through the courtship part a bit too quickly. Still makes sense though.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very impressive!!!! mucho props to you

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good story. Quite short aswell but, but short is good. I liked your style the way you told their life story by verbs and pronouns

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is basically a whole story in this, I'm pretty impressed that you could do that with only verbs and pronouns. The story makes it also really beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's wonderful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple yet creative. I love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its lovely it tells the true meaning of love


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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