Life Saver

Life Saver

A Poem by Debby Carlson

You were my life saver,

            The whole world seemed
to move on not noticing
                        there was this huge hole
                                              in the universe
                                                          you once filled.

            They said it was just a matter
  of time but I still thought
                      you'd manage to save yourself,
                                            as you've always saved me.
                                                                  I was wrong.

© 2011 Debby Carlson

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Debby Carlson
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This is really amazing. I like this it's a powerful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago

powerful! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on June 13, 2011
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Debby Carlson
Debby Carlson

Honey Grove, TX

I'm a writer and when I am not writing, I am thinking about writing. In my spare time, I work full-time as a dietician. I have a loving husband and 9 very active and creative grkiddos. I love God. I l.. more..