Fade Into Black

It's getting dark!

I can't see you anymore!

Can't touch you!

Can't feel you!

Time is slipping away!

Everything is turning black!

Damn!

I can't turn back!

You are fading!

Into the distance...

Is this death? My death?

Am I dying?

Did I die?

Did I?

Die?

?

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Very powerful... and a bit scary in a different kind of way... A great piece with a good format. It's different from what you have written... Great job!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

You wrote this with so much urgency, different from your usual well done.

[Chaos]

I love the speed of this piece. The flow is cemented in the meaning of the words. You envoked a feeling of panic in me and that is commendable. Thank you for sharing this write.

[Lyndsay Castro]

I think you really got my heart rate up when I read this! Very dark, very deep. And I love the photo you added.

[shadadakiya]

sad!!!

[Mysty Rayn]

Wow. Fantastic. I was on the edge with this one, I still am. Are you? :)

[Jonathan Escoffery]

Kinda creepy.lol Makes me think of how confused a person must be when they pass on to whatever is after death. Your short lines make for fun reading.

[Samuel Dickens]

It's dark, to be sure.

[George Love]

You pushed all the right buttons with this one. Wow, very good stuff here. Chilling!

[shoepolish]

extremely powerful, i can feel the panic. Good job!