What If Heaven Was A Place?

What If Heaven Was A Place?

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

What if heaven was a place

Called planet Earth

And the Creator walked among us

What if heaven was a place

Like this beautiful garden

And we were created

To take care of it

What if heaven was a place

like this Eden

With trees and animals

River and streams

Mountains and vallies

Filled with such wondrous things

What if heaven was a place

Where you could see God's face

In the eyes of every child born

What if heaven was a place

With rain and snow

Sleet and hail

Wind and sunshine too

What if heaven was a place

Not so far away

Would we take care of her

Would we cherish her

If heaven was a place

Where the Creator

Walked with us

Talked with us

Died for us

 

© 2009 Deborah Leah Krempa


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I'm afraid a lot of people still wouldn't take care of it--especially if there was profit to be made.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful. This made me want to repost a piece I wrote about heaven, fabulous work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Insightful and nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


In your comment, you said you were wanting to write a poem that was not sad, and now you have! This is truly beautiful, and I have enjoyed it so very much!! What if? Oh yes!!!


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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