Dim Lights

Dim Lights

A Poem by Decaf

I sit where the light is dull

Where the sun is off

And where you can’t see me

All these scars I have on me

Are where a civil war has been raging on

In the light I am nice helpful and great

But  as the light dims they fade away 

And the inner demon destroys me

So how you going to leave me here

© 2011 Decaf


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Um. When did you start writing? There's no poetry format at all here, you wrote "So how you going to leave me here" - Incorrect wording? - It doesn't make any sense.... "I am nice helpful and great?" Look at some of my poems (I started writing poetry two months ago and I know how to write poetry....) and maybe you'll get an idea? Maybe writing isn't your thing dude D:

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Decaf
Decaf

Burleson, TX



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I'm a fun guy that has a deep heart and mind. My name is Decaf like the coffee. It's awesome I'm a skater, I'm also an ex cutter. more..

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