cicada

cicada

A Poem by Deepwood's Hart
"

for when you cannot feel the rain

"

In a chrysalis beneath the earth I wait

To unshell myself, an exoskeleton

Soft and young and pale, undyed but dry

 Here, the rain cannot reach me, here

There are no fingers but still

I brush away the spider web sensation on my

Brow, which is only the roots of the

Iris or the cattail in the marshland.

Does it matter that I cannot feel the rain

When I wait in the heavy damp clay

Making pots beneath the earth

Mimicking artifacts to throw off some

Poor anthropologist who mistakes

The Neolithic for a cicada?

I shall be false as the found old body

Left clinging to a leaf.

I shall devour your roots, mar your trees

And then sing you to sleep

When the rain stops.

© 2010 Deepwood's Hart


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This has great imagery. I particularly like this part:

"I shall devour your roots, mar your trees
And then sing you to sleep
When the rain stops."

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice. I love the strong word you used and how you analogize throughout out the piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So beautiful!

Your descriptions are so detailed that it´s like being inside your mind, and being the subject of your poem.

I can´t quote one particular line or paragraph because the entire poem is exquisite!

What a beautiful poet you are!

Posted 13 Years Ago


how wonderful that you let your mind go to these wild places to share what you can see

Posted 13 Years Ago



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