A whim

A whim

A Poem by ramblingsofapoet

On a whim
its him again
I guess I was the thought of the day
It only gets in the way of what I really need
He brings me joy
if only temporary
he puts a smile on my face
if only for a moment
he makes me feel needed
if only for a second
is that okay?
I mean its only temporary
that temporary stay
if just for a day
is whats needed in my life
before it goes back
to being all gray

© 2012 ramblingsofapoet


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This is perfectly written. It flows in a sad but steady beat. But technical accomplishments aside. The subject is so relatable. As though you we're pulling the thought out my own head through my eyes upon dental floss which reconfigured as ink on a page. If that makes any sense.

Which it doesn't.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ramblingsofapoet

9 Years Ago

yes it make a lot of sense in a very artistic way. I glad you can relate to it. It is a very sad r.. read more



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This is perfectly written. It flows in a sad but steady beat. But technical accomplishments aside. The subject is so relatable. As though you we're pulling the thought out my own head through my eyes upon dental floss which reconfigured as ink on a page. If that makes any sense.

Which it doesn't.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ramblingsofapoet

9 Years Ago

yes it make a lot of sense in a very artistic way. I glad you can relate to it. It is a very sad r.. read more

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Added on September 5, 2012
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Tags: whim, booty call, other women, temporary

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ramblingsofapoet
ramblingsofapoet

san diego, CA



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