Prompt 98 - Have You Ever

 

Prompt # 98 – Write about how you felt when you discovered you had been lied to.

 

Have You Ever

Have you ever just sat and cried
All because the one you loved lied
Have you ever wondered why should I try

When all that boy does is make me cry

 

Have you ever just played your part

Even though you knew he’d been cheating from the start
Have you ever loved somebody in every way

To the point you didn’t  know what to say

Have you ever just came apart
Because the one you loved played with your heart
Have you ever wished upon a star
But that wish never went very far

Have you ever laid down at night
And thought why did I start that stupid fight
Have you ever felt used
And all this time been confused

Have you ever felt like giving up
Even when you always had your girls beside you cheering you up
Are you tired of writing your first name with his last
Knowing it will never be
Me too

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

i really know how you feel... this such a great poem! you're so talented!

[A U R i]

Yes i most def
know how you feel

great poem! its bangin =]]

[bookitty]

Hey There,
I wanted to thank you for your review on my poem and also tell you how much I loved yours. I think you have a great writing ability for a young lady and I'm looking foward to all that you will offer to the writing community. This one is going in my library. I like how you convey your emotion and make the reader empathize and relate by asking "Have you ever" It seems like you almost sat down and wrote this piece while you were in the thick of this situation, and this was the beautiful result that manifested. Good job! Keep writing!

[RADHICA]

this is soooo cute n yes i think alot of poeple have felt that way atleast once in their life this is reallyy relatable....superb job!!!!!

[the_real_me]

I know how you feel. My boyfriend just dumpt me and I wish I could kill him