Reasons why...

Reasons why...

A Poem by Phillitup

Reasons why...
you're my friend,
I care,
we stick together,
you're amazing,
we are perfect,
you listen.
Yes,
only some of the reasons why...
I couldn't live without you.

© 2013 Phillitup


Author's Note

Phillitup
Cheesy but true, and sadly so. One would think that a person should prefer themselves or couldn't live without food or water but for one to truly live they must have a friend who won't turn their back on them. So true, I'm lucky. It has been a little over one year since I met some of the best friends in my life. Sadly, one of them isn't happy. I want her to be happy because she means so much to me. At the root of this it sounds like I am looking out for her. I am ashamed because I feel so selfish. Trying to save her from thoughts because I couldn't possibly live without one of my best friends. I hope life gets better for her because I hate to see her like this but I will support her through thick and thin. I just hope she remembers that.

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That's really sweet. I hope she gets better, too. She must be really glad that she has a friend like you. I think that she wants to get better, but she thinks she can't. After reading your "Author's Note", I can see that she means a lot to you, and ves versa. You really shouldn't feel ashamed or selfish; she wouldn't want you to. You couldn't have stopped the thoughts that reached her; don't get too down. Her life will get better, but I think she just doesn't want to admit it to herself that it will. Saying that you stick together, I think of me and my friend; we are like glue, or a little girl with icecream. I know, icecream, weird, but I really want some and there's some in my freezer. Point is, it reminds me of my friend and I. She listens, because she doesn't want to loose you, too, it seems. Even though this is "cheesy", it's deep. I truly love this. 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

8 Years Ago

Haha! I bet she wants that icecream. Shoot, now I want some. :P
Phillitup

8 Years Ago

:)P
Savior of Time

8 Years Ago

dodododododo, i liiiiiike iiiiiicecreeeeeeam



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You sound like a really good friend, it' great to have real friends like you. =D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks...:)

You've said it all in this short piece of writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks
the poem was totally reflecting your feelings! love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks
This was a lovely write! Not all of us are lucky enough to find true friends in life. Thoughs who do find friendship like this are very greatful friends themselves. you showed your emotion well... Thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.
Sweet, concise.

More so then food or water, the soul cannot without emotion or love.

Even if it is just the love shared between friends.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks
it is a very rare thing indeed to have a true friend, even once in a lifetime. there are so many things which can determine the value of a liaison between two people. Dell, i am almost 59 years old and i can tell you...there have been many friends who have come along and fallen by the wayside for one reason or another. i love your take on this. it means a lot to me to see that i was not alone in my thinking as a young man. truth is, when thick comes to thin and when push comes to shove...that is when you find out who your true friends are. i have had only one, and still do. awesome write, Dell. thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quinfinn

8 Years Ago

my pleasure...you do know that i accept r/r's right?
Phillitup

8 Years Ago

I do now!
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

very well, i am open to all poetry....just don't overwhelm me
BEAUTIFUL

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks
fine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow .. nice one... short but said a ton

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks
You are a great young author and I believe you will go far! Great format and I love the way the poem is structured. Keep up the great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

8 Years Ago

thanks

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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