Make me a Promise

Make me a Promise

A Poem by Phillitup
"

Please make me a promise...

"
Make me a promise
that you won't let it reach you.
Show me
that you truly have strength.
Act
 like there will be something better.
You don't really
 pretend you're okay.
It hurts
more than you know to see this happen.
If you really cared
about the rest than you would accept what I tell you.
But no.
Just make me a promise
that you'll try to listen next time.

© 2013 Phillitup


Author's Note

Phillitup
To you, only one of you. You know who you are dear friend. Please don't take this as something mean being said. I'm a desperate friend who cares to much to see this happen. Please don't. Make me a promise...

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very well-said. a friend can be known as a good friend , apropos bad friend, when he/she makes you cry with your things, events, mistakes, and not laughing with you in your things, events, mistakes. a good friend is the one who is there when you cry, but the bad one is only there when you laugh. a good friend lives inside you, and is a candle that alight the way along, cantrast one who is like your shadow when in darkness it will begone. thanks for sharing, it was very meaningful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very well-said. a friend can be known as a good friend , apropos bad friend, when he/she makes you cry with your things, events, mistakes, and not laughing with you in your things, events, mistakes. a good friend is the one who is there when you cry, but the bad one is only there when you laugh. a good friend lives inside you, and is a candle that alight the way along, cantrast one who is like your shadow when in darkness it will begone. thanks for sharing, it was very meaningful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We can ask for promises and hopefully others should keep them for man's or woman's words are their bond...Well penned...:)................

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thank you, it means a lot to me.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)...........
Only a true friend would write this poem. It's great that you expressed your sensitivity to the situation: 'It hurts more than you know to see this happen.' Sometimes a person, such as the one you have addressed, fails to realize how their actions affect those who care about them. By expressing your hurt, perhaps you have helped this person more than you know. I hope and pray that your poem will have a healing effect on this person. Thanks for sharing.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your prayers and kind words...:)
Wow. Deep, as Cameron would say. I'm sorry she won't listen, I'm sure she is, too. I kind of have a problem with my own friend.. She said that she doesn't understand how it could hurt so much when she doesn't show the hurt.. I don't get it either..

-Willa

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

6 Years Ago

Ha! That's awesome! Mine's getting better too.

-Willa
Phillitup

6 Years Ago

Glad to hear it! :)
Savior of Time

6 Years Ago

Yerp.

-Willa
this is deep! it sounds like me when im trying to explain my cutting to my friend... its a beautiful poem I love it! keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

Thanks...:)

You are the only person as of late giving me reviews and I want you to know.. read more
writingurl14

6 Years Ago

thanks and any reviews that you give me will be wonderful!
writingurl14

6 Years Ago

and ill totally keep on reading your stuff!

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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