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Listen

A Poem by Phillitup

Listen,

can't you hear the bells? The raindrops?




flowing wind                            that whips through the air.
Whistling and howling. Eerily.

Stop your life for one second, and hear it.



                 It's calling you, the world.
Go answer it's request.

© 2013 Phillitup


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Really good keep writing!-100

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

Thanks
this is really good! I really like it :) Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

thanks
writingurl14

6 Years Ago

yw :)
I found this to be well written and very thought provoking. We get so busy in our day to day lives we oftentimes fail to see, hear, feel the simplicity around us. If we would just slow down, be still, appreciate and learn...



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

thank you
u r super too kid like me

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

thanks
sonceotrok

6 Years Ago

yo
I see your listening well Dell!
Your a very fine poet and you have a creative mind. Thank you for sharing this idea today.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

6 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for the review! I appreciate them :)
The format is... different. I like it. I feel like it suits your poem well, even though it's "out of place" considering the other formats of other poems. Anyway, the poem itself is delightful. I enjoyed it. :)

-Willa

Posted 6 Years Ago


Savior of Time

6 Years Ago

By the way, I've listened. I've also heard the voices of the mountains..
Phillitup

6 Years Ago

Thank you Willa, :)
Savior of Time

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :D

-Willa

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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