Nothing

Nothing

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

Words about nothing

Written by no one

No one will read

 

Photos of nothing

Taken by no one

No one will see

 

Music for nothing

Composed by no one

No one will hear

 

Roads that go nowhere 

Through valleys of nothing

driven by no one

 

No darkness

No light

No joy

No sorrow

No pity

No laughter

No heartache

No memories

 

Just nothing

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Baby Ricochet


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now float zen such a hard place to remain

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

thank you
This made me think about all the genius that goes without witness. It is baron all the while filling the page with haste and drama. The starkness is colorless at the end, that's impressive. The flow is almost lovely...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thank you
Wow, that made me feel very empty. But in the vast scheme of things, the hugeness and timelessness of the universe, how insignificant we are. Lovely & thought provoking...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thank you
when it all blows away there will be nothing, and all our words and thoughts, and hope and dreams, words and poems will just disappear and burn up into a space ball puff of smoke and debris. Now i'm depressed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

The buddists speak of impermanence in a positive light,
Nothing still makes us feel every word. Great poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the review
Something about nothing. A feeling, a state of being. A bare white room brightly lit. Nowhere to hide and still the truth is elusive. Some of my tortured nights were spent wide awake. That light drained all meaning. I think you have been that too.

A well written poem. Either brave or desperate. It doesn't matter. It works very well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
Nothing...not an easy word to describe but you have rendered that "nothing" full of life :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


feels like some stuff i've been going through lately at work. feeling like a robot or something. good write bro. i miss reading your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

I miss reading yours too bro. You need to post some new stuff. I know it's killing you not to.
Where ther's life, there will be Something. I can relate this nothingness to death...eerie images of silence haunt me.
Thought provoking! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing nothing
Being devoid of any and all emotions is probably the saddest of all, this piece was moving. Simple yet effective in it's delivery.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

thank you for the review frieda

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Baby Ricochet

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